Wednesday, July 3, 2024

The Counterfeit Zombies of Noc (The Legend of Guts and Glory Freedom Fighters of Nil Book 2) by Jessica Crichton; Sequel to Dr. Fixit is Glorious


 The Counterfeit Zombies of Noc (The Legend of Guts and Glory Freedom Fighters of Nil Book 2) by Jessica Crichton; Sequel to Dr. Fixit is Glorious 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 


Spoilers: As this review contains spoilers, please read my review of the previous volume, Dr. Fixit's Malicious Machine . 

Even though Dr. Fixit Malicious Machine, the first book in Jessica Crichton’s The Legend of Guts and Glory Freedom Fighters of Nil series stars twins Trevor and Tabitha Tate AKA Guts and Glory respectively, Trevor is the main protagonist who tells the story and goes through the most changes. The second volume, Counterfeit Zombies of Noc evens the score by giving the spotlight to Tabitha and spinning the series into a deeper more cerebral direction.

When last we left our heroes, they were transported to a parallel universe called Nil by the enigmatic Dr. Fixit and were caught up in a gang war between Kids and Teens. They found their mother but lost their older sister after she was recruited to join the Teens. Their mother revealed the family's connection to this strange place and the truth behind this youthful war engineered by Dr. Fixit who is not what he seemed.

In this volume, the Tate twins and their new companions have to travel to the land of Noc to find out information from Marie, a former scientist who was a part of Fixit's past. Along the way they encounter zombies and other creepy creatures. Meanwhile, Tabitha is questioning her own self worth and the meaning to her name, Glory. Her reflection and intellect may end up being her only allies as her party dwindles and more Kids are abducted and brainwashed into becoming zombies.

Counterfeit Zombies of Noc is good the way other good second volumes of most series are. It raises the stakes, makes things darker, and plot and world building give way to deep characterization. 

The previous volume was dark enough in creating a parallel world where gangs of children fight gangs of teenagers and where teenagers are revealed to be mind controlled puppets who follow Fixit’s will. This volume increases that sense of abandonment and manipulation of other people's free will.

When the Twins and their friends first encounter the zombies, there is a bit of dark comedy as they stop pursuing the kids and then just as quickly wonder in befuddled confusion over why they are chasing them. This first impression makes the Reader think that it is going to be a parody of zombie movies, books, and shows. Maybe this volume might even be funny? But this might give the Reader and characters a false sense of security.

The Tates and their friends follow the zombies to their headquarters and they learn the circumstances of their brainwashing. Unfortunately knowing it and fighting against it are two different things. The zombies return to their programming and come after the kids. Worse in an almost Invasion of the Body Snatchers manner, most of the kids are brainwashed as well. 

In one chilling chapter, Trevor, Guts, is converted. It's eerie to see this once sweet brave kid who would have died to protect his sister now coldly stalking that same sister and treating her like an enemy that he must destroy.

After reading about the full effect of the zombie’s manipulation, it puts their introduction in a more disturbing light. Rather being a humorous random shout out to zombie media, it instead takes on darker implications. The hold on the zombies was temporarily broken to gain the kid's trust and lure them to their lair. A final reveal over who the zombies really are makes the hold on them even more sadistic and cruel. It's a deliberate ploy for the main villain to tighten one final screw of humiliation into these young people. 

Besides the darker plot, Crichton gives her characters depth, most notably Tabitha. While Trevor became Guts, leading by courage and valor, Tabitha is uncertain. She was once an intellectual, the brain to her brother's brawn. Now she is stuck with a name, Glory, that she doesn't understand.

In this world, everyone's names are either given by themselves or someone else who recognizes something unique about them. They could reflect their appearance like “Shark” (who has sharp teeth), convey their interest (“Books” the resident researcher and genius), or personality traits (the aforementioned “Guts.”)

This leaves Glory confused. Glory is such a loaded term one that doesn't seem helpful in battle so why is she one of the presumed heroes of legend? Asking others’ opinions doesn't help because they suggest “pretty,” “spirited,” and other adjectives that Tabitha does not feel that she is. 

Tabitha is crippled with self-doubt and anxiety that impairs her own defenses and abilities. In a strange Fantasy Science Fiction novel, this is a very realistic portrayal of someone with Anxiety. Fears and insecurity can overcome someone's life even if they aren't a hero destined to save a dystopia parallel universe. That person often downplays their achievements and talents as their questions and fears take over their lives. This is what happens to Tabitha. She rejects the name Glory for a time and considers herself a load to the group, something that their enemies gleefully use as a means to taunt and break her.

It is when Tabitha has to fight the zombies alone that she recognizes the power that was dormant and was waiting to be released. She recognizes that just as any group of fighters need Guts, they also need Glory, a light, a purpose, and a reason to keep fighting. In a climactic chapter, Glory truly accepts her name and her place in this world.

Crichton knew how to draw Readers into her world before and now knows how to keep them there. There are definite hooks for a sequel so let's see if she knows the best way to take her Readers out of that world.

Conduit to Murder (A Belfast Murder Mystery Book 6) by Brian O'Hare; Conduit to an Excellent Mystery

Conduit to Murder (A Belfast Murder Mystery Book 6) by Brian O'Hare; Conduit to an Excellent Mystery

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 

Spoilers: A conduit is someone or something that conveys, protects, and sends things like information, goods, money, and ideas. When it comes to crime, a conduit could send information, order, or bribery money to various criminals and can be beneficial in creating an organized network of such individuals.

Brian O'Hare’s latest Belfast Murder Mystery, Conduit to Murder is a thrilling murder mystery in which Inspector Thomas Sheehan and Co. have to find a conduit to a large criminal network.

Sheehan and his team investigates the murder of an antiques dealer/politician found bludgeoned to death and who is part of a sinister criminal network. They discover someone has been leaking information about the case to the press. They receive alarming death threats that escalate into violent attacks and kidnapping. There appears to be a spy on the police force but who? How large is this network anyway and who are they? Above all, who is the conduit who is conveying information and payments to the various members and bringing all of these people together? 

This is a solid mystery all around. Many of the frequent tropes found in O’Hare's series like corrupt rich people, conflict within the team, suspenseful moments when one or several of Sheehan's team are in danger, are dialed up in this volume. This makes it a winning installment in the Belfast Murder Mystery series.

Many of the best moments are those that concern Sheehan's team and their close proximity towards danger. In one chapter, Sheehan and his wife, Margaret, are almost run off the road by a violent driver who is not only expressing road rage but is tied to their investigation. The incident causes Sheehan to put Margaret into hiding and their separation is heartfelt.

In another chapter, Sheehan's partner Denise Stewart and her boyfriend, Sergeant Tom Allen go undercover as a vacationing couple while chasing a lead to the South of France. Unfortunately, their targets are aware of their presence and people are killed. It's a very violent graphic trap and shows the long reaches that their antagonists possess.

The mole in the police force subplot is well played and dips into suspicion almost to the point of paranoia. It's tense reading about every word that the team says even in confidence, every lead that they investigate even if they are red herrings, and their homes and loved ones used as collateral. It really brings home the thought of constant surveillance and what happens when you can't even trust those you see every day.

Also the mole reminds the characters and Readers how wide this crime ring is and how their power and influence surrounds everyone and everything. In fact, this is only one of many crime ring conspiracy groups in the entire series. These groups are made of rich influential people who believe that they are above the law and feel entitled to do anything that they want including theft, rape, assault, forced prostitution, human trafficking, and murder without repercussion. They are insulated in their own worlds and think that those under them are theirs to play with, ethics, laws, or basic human decency be damned. 

It seriously makes one wonder if these various groups in each volume are connected as one large supergroup and there is some mysterious head pulling all of the strings that has yet to be revealed. 

Conduit to Murder is tightly put together with its clues, investigation, witness questioning, suspect interrogation, and resolution. It's not the type that relies on twists except for the mole reveal. Mostly it focuses on this war between the crime ring and Sheehan's team. This is a conduit into an excellent mystery.


 

Monday, July 1, 2024

Freeze Frame by Rob Santana; Santana Captures Quirky Romance Turned Crime Thriller







Freeze Frame by Rob Santana; Santana Captures Quirky Romance Turned Crime Thriller 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 


Spoilers: Rob Santana is an expert at writing the unexpected.

The Oscar Goes To features the titular awards ceremony interrupted by the Best Actress Winner’s on air suicide. Little Blue Eyes turns a potentially heartwarming story about a woman taking in an abandoned baby into a thriller about addiction, racism, and human trafficking. Even real people like Adolf Hitler and Jane Austen are taken to strange unexpected dimensions. When you read one of Santana's books you don't know what will happen. All you do know is that it won't be anything like the book that you thought it was going to be at the beginning.

His latest novel, Freeze Frame, starts out as a quirky romantic comedy drama that builds into a psychological crime thriller and gives you enough time to appreciate the transition.

Future filmmaker, Kim Poynter loves taking videos of the people around him particularly of Nova Muller, the pretty girl from across the street. He's in love with her but since she already has a boyfriend, Zane, he settles into the friend zone, for now. He is preparing to record Nova’s brother's wedding during the time that both he and Nova discover some horrible secrets about their families. The suspicion and tension from these secrets build until the wedding when Kim happens to capture a crime that will change his and Nova's lives forever. 

Freeze Frame is the type of book that has a slow build up before it reaches the climax. If done right, it can be a benefit by letting one get to know the characters and the conflicts. If done wrong, it can be a sluggish detriment as the Reader waits for something exciting to happen. Santana does it right. He allows us to understand his characters, particularly Kim and Nova, and see them as rich vibrant people before their worlds fall apart around them. 

Kim struggles with his own ambitions and expectations from his family. He has an eye for film and is interested in capturing the world around him. It is how he expresses himself by measuring every camera angle, preparing every shot, and making his work into works of cinematic art even if they are weddings, parties, and every day events. They aren't ordinary to him. They allow him to understand the people that he is recording and allow them to recognize his dedication. 

Kim's materialistic parents however are not supportive of his drive. They want to know why he isn't more interested in earning money and making investments. Look at them. They put their money into Lehman Brothers and that is certainly “too big to fail.” Right? (This book is set in the late 2000’s before the financial crisis.) 

Besides his parent's lack of financial foresight, they are also having marital troubles. Kim captures a compromising situation involving his parents and it changes their relationship forever. 

Kim captures videos because for him they symbolize perfection. If he doesn't like something he can edit it or change it. The negative parts can be removed. Unfortunately, that cannot happen after he puts the camera down. He has to deal with real life with all of its complications, messiness, and hypocrisy.

Nova is the opposite of Kim in many ways. Kim uses his camera to create a fanciful perfect world, but Nova uses herself. She acts like the smart attractive girl next door. The Miss Everything who is going places. What everyone thinks that they see is a brilliant beautiful good girl. What they don't see is a troubled young woman with a suspicious nature, a surly attitude, and complicated relationships with those around her.

She doesn't get along with her father who is overprotective of her in ways that could veer towards inappropriate. There is a bond that at times might be loving but can also be suffocating even threatening.

Their relationship gets progressively worse throughout the book until it completely deteriorates in a way that is sad but inevitable.

Nova also doesn't like her future sister in law at all. Her only supporter is her brother and even that will soon change. Her relationship with Zane is crumbling. He can be incredibly possessive and verbally abusive. Nova has some serious emotional issues that need working through and her friendship with Kim gives her the chance to be honest.

The build-up of Kim and Nova's “will they won't they” potential relationship is a quirky romantic comedy drama, the story of two misfits, that are two-thirds of a love triangle and are from dysfunctional families, that find their way to each other. Then it takes a 180 degree turn and this sweet and cute potential romance is not so sweet or cute.

Things occur that cause them to question their relationships with friends, family, and each other. One or more secrets are brought forward and a violent act is committed. This violent act spirals the book into a thriller. Kim records it and has to weigh whether to reveal it to the authorities and how to hide it from nefarious people who want it to stay private. 

The characterization that was present at the beginning gives way more to plot. But since the Reader has gotten to know Kim and Nova, that makes their situation more dire and the conflicts surrounding them more pronounced. They are left with some difficult choices to make and either way could result in more difficulties. They are hard choices but once made are clearly understood because of what we had experienced with the characters beforehand.

Freeze Frame captures a memorable quirky romance turned crime thriller. It is the picture of an excellent read and is among Santana's best.






 

Friday, June 28, 2024

The Soul of a Shoemaker: The Story of Frank Katana’s Daring Escape from Communist Yugoslavia, His Rise to Freedom, and His Journey to Success by Susan Cork; Dramatic Nonfiction Novel About Escaping a Dictatorship To Freedom

The Soul of a Shoemaker: The Story of Frank Katana’s Daring Escape from Communist Yugoslavia, His Rise to Freedom, and His Journey to Success by Susan Cork; Dramatic Nonfiction Novel About Escaping a Dictatorship To Freedom

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 


Spoilers: We are the continuation of our ancestors. In our blood lies their stories, appearances, backgrounds, struggles, loves, defeats, and triumphs. Many of those backgrounds stem from immigration coming from one country to another either by choice or by force. Many immigrant experiences speak of poverty, slavery, tyranny, crime, wealth, marginalization and a desire to escape to freedom, choice, and independence. Once we realize that our stories have more in common than they differ, can we understand that immigration is not separated as “us” or “them.” Whether our ancestors lived within one country and ethnicity or several, they combined to make us who we are.

Susan Cork’s Nonfiction novel, The Soul of a Shoemaker tells the stirring story of her father, Frank Katana and his journey from former Yugoslavia to Canada. It is a fascinating story of tyranny, romance, independence, economics, sacrifice and finding one's niche, success, and personal happiness.

The book largely emphasizes three specific points in Katana’s life: His life in rural Mali Bukovec and training as a cobbler, his growing discontent with the Communist system in Yugoslavia and attempts to escape it, and emigration to Canada and building a life, career, and family in this new country. 

Katana's time in Yugoslavia focuses on daily life. When he couldn't find training as a cobbler in his village, he had to commute to a nearby town for training. His shoe making skills came in handy when he and his friend's shoes broke and he repaired them.

There are fascinating details about the community in which Katana lived. He was part of the volunteer firefighting crew and was called in to help neighbors whose homes were on fire and needed rescuing. At a village gathering, he fell in love with Ljubica, a local woman. Even though they spent very little time together, Katana was in love enough to imagine a life with her and write to her after he left the country, certain that she would move to be with him.

The focus on the mundanity of daily life in Katana's village contrasts with the oppressive authoritarian Yugoslavian government surrounding it. Katana wasn't a rebel looking to fight against the system. He was just someone who wanted to survive within it. He said one thing, disagreed with them one time and was brought in for interrogation. 

It's an eye opening experience to read about such a dictatorship and should remind people that in such a government there is no room for disagreement. It's something that many who want or think an authoritarian government is the way to go, such as those who want a certain Project from the Heritage Foundation and other allies of a certain Presidential candidate to come to pass, should remember. No matter how loyal a person thinks they are, no matter how much that they think they will fit in because they aren't the main target that is being marginalized, an authoritarian government will eventually affect them. All it takes is a wrong word, a slight criticism, a defense of someone else and that person will become the next target. Many countries’ cemeteries and grave sites are made up of people who thought that they would be safe from tyranny and authoritarianism and who at worst initially encouraged and supported it and at best looked the other way when they were warned. 

Katana’s escape attempts are particularly suspenseful and are almost reminiscent of a thriller. One chapter focused on Katana hopping on a train fabricating a story about visiting a lover. Unfortunately, his lie was discovered by an officer and he had to make a jump for it off of the train. He then had to flee on foot to the countryside until he practically staggered into Austria. 

Katana eventually settled in Canada where he went through many steps and missteps before he could earn a decent living and send for Ljubica. One of his first employers refused to pay him the full amount of his salary. His first shoe repair business folded. His second got off to a rough start because of his indolent partners who cared more about cutting corners and getting rich than providing quality footwear. Finally, he managed to get them in line and built enough money to be comfortable and secure.

Because of their long distant relationship, Katana's romance with Ljubica is underwritten. However, it does show their commitment to each other to maintain that closeness even while living in different countries and Ljubica still living in oppressive Yugoslavia. Many times Katana received word that she was on her way only to be detained. He went through a peculiar wedding ceremony where he and Ljubica were married en absentia, with a female relative standing in place for her so they would technically be married. Their reunion and official wedding was a moment of triumph and love.

The Soul of a Shoemaker is rich with detail and emotion. It's the type of story that can make Readers laugh, cry, sigh, tense, fume, and clap sometimes within a few chapters. It has a lot of soul and technically a lot of sole. Katana wasn't a famous or notable man but his daughter knew how to bring him to life so that anyone who reads his story will know all about him.





 

Wednesday, June 26, 2024

The Word Thieves by Carol Riggs; The Prince and The Pauper as Steampunk Women

 


The Word Thieves by Carol Riggs; The Prince and The Pauper as Steampunk Women

By Julie Sara Porter

Bookworm Reviews


Spoilers: Mark Twain’s The Prince and the Pauper has been adapted and parodied for a long time.  Just about everyone from Guy Williams, Erroll Flynn, Oliver Reed, Dan Aykroyd, Eddie Murphy,  Mary Kate and Ashley Olson, Raven Symone, Vanessa Hudgens, Mickey Mouse, Garfield the Cat, Rowan Atkinson as Edmund Blackadder, Davy Jones from The Monkees, Kimber Benton from Jem, Wishbone, Barbie, Candace from Phineas and Ferb, and many others have taken stabs at this story of a royal or wealthy person switching places with a commoner or poor person either of their own volition or because of the schemes of others. It’s a familiar story that is easily recognizable and is ripe for many to put their own stamps and interpretations of it. As with many overused adaptations, it can come across as trite and cliche. Anyone taking on a variation of such a familiar story needs to do something with it. Luckily this latest version has.


The Word Thieves by Carol Riggs takes the familiar story of The Prince and the Pauper and does some things, particularly in terms of world building and characterization that make it stand out from many of the other variations. 


The city of Noviston, is ruled by the Golden Monarch. His daughter, Eliana is concerned about an approaching threat to their city and curious about how their rules and taxes affect the common people. During a disastrous outing which almost turns into a riot, Eliana bumps into Taylen, an impoverished factory worker who resembles the princess. The duo’s striking similarities shine the proverbial lightbulb over Eliana’s head. She and Taylen will switch places for a day so Taylen can live in luxury for a while and Eliana can do her research. Unfortunately, complications ensue and the two find themselves dealing with various conflicts both within and outside of Noviston.


For a familiar story, Riggs surrounds it with a detailed and imaginative setting. Noviston is a world that hovers between Medieval/Renaissance Fantasy and Victorian Steampunk, with more emphasis on the latter. Metallurgy is an important part of their way of life. Metals are mined, prepared in the factories, and shipped out to other kingdoms. They are so important that the city is rigidly separated into districts named after them, such as the Gold District where the royals and the clergy live, Silver District where the nobles and business tycoons live, and Tin District where the workers live. This goes into the strict class system where the people from different classes live in their own world without acknowledging or interacting with others. That division makes it easier for the Gold District to do horrible things to the poorer people that they never see and allows for protestors like Taylen’s Robbing Hood group to form and fight against them.


Along with metals, Noviston is populated with what they call mechanicals. They are used as security, companionship, and other means. (Though oddly enough not menial labor. They still use humans for that). There is an army of mechanicals run by Avery, who is part inventor and part sorceress. Avery gives her mechs the ability to extract not only taxes in coin but in words. 


The mech orders their victim to say a select number of words and they mentally remove them from that person’s mind. The victims not only forget the word but any definition or concept behind it. If for example someone chooses “courage” the mechs turn that person into a nervous coward. If they remove “love” that person turns into a bitter misanthrope. The psychological horror is terrifying to imagine. The mechs leave behind a population that is forcibly ignorant and easy to control.


The consistency of mechs also plays into Taylen and Eliana’s gifts. Eliana has a talent for building and repairing mechs. All she has to do is look at something to find out what’s wrong and fix it. It’s a talent not  many women of her station would have (and those like Avery who do guard it jealously). However, it shows her as someone who is willing to get her hands dirty and do the actual work instead of sitting in the palace and waiting patiently for others to do the work for her. 


Taylen also has a unique power too, even more impressive than Eliana’s. She can mentally communicate with mechs. This telepathic ability comes in handy especially when she’s in the Golden Palace. She learns secrets about Avery, the Gold Monarch, and their real goals in fighting the upcoming battle. She also communicates with a feisty little mech pet that is able to sneak around the palace and provide intel to her and Eliana. 


Riggs also counters the hoary narration of The Prince and the Pauper adaptations with great characterization and plot points which challenge not only the narrative of this particular story but the genre in which it is in. Taylen and Eliana are both well written protagonists that gain empathy and understanding through their journey and become more effective leaders. Taylen was emotional and acted on impulsive anger. She led the Robbing Hoods to help others but mostly to stick it to a system in which she felt marginal and oppressed. Even if no one knew that she was behind it, it was a way of sticking it to those in charge. As Eliana, Taylen  learns to be a more strategic thinker and planner and recognize the long term impacts that each decision makes. She becomes more clear headed and compassionate in her approach particular offering and accepting forgiveness when a mole is discovered within the rebellion.


Eliana was involved and compassionate, for a royal. Her early involvement stemmed from naivete and a lack of understanding over how the people live. The rigid class division kept her from seeing the people let alone understanding them. It is worth noting that she suggested the increase on word taxes not realizing the impact that it would have on the people. When she offers to switch places with Eliana, she treats it more like a lark and a fun game rather than the serious situation in which they could be punished (and Taylen imprisoned and maybe executed) if caught. Her time as Taylen gives her a chance to interact with the people that she never met and understand them. She becomes more empathetic and in turn a better leader when she sees where the people are coming from.


The book does some interesting things with the framework of The Prince and the Pauper playing with and challenging the IP as well as conventions that are found in Science Fiction and Fantasy. I don’t want to necessarily say it’s better for it but it at least makes things different. For example there are early hints of an actual reason for Eliana and Taylen’s similarities but the book never really follows through with them and chalks it up to a massive coincidence. It somewhat stretches credibility that two women who look alike live in the same district and just happen to run into each other one day without there being any sort of back story to it. But in a way, that makes the plot refreshing that there doesn’t always have to be an important story to it, It just happened. 


Another interesting point is how the plot resolves itself. I don’t want to give too much away but it doesn’t end the way most novels of this type do. The emphasis is not on destruction or rebellion but on compromise and collaboration. A new world is created from the old and yes the old one shows signs of its demise. Ultimately the new world is created by separating and declaring independence from the old. Sometimes that’s the only way to gain true understanding and freedom.


The Word Thieves takes a familiar story and builds on it. In some ways, particularly in terms of setting, character, and plot, it improves it.


Tuesday, June 25, 2024

The Unholy Trinity: A Collection of 99 Stories by L. Marie Wood; Horror Anthology Delivers on Shocks, Scares, Twists


 The Unholy Trinity: A Collection of 99 Stories by L. Marie Wood; Horror Anthology Delivers on Shocks, Scares, Twists 

By Julie Sara Porter 
Bookworm Reviews 

Spoilers: L. Marie Wood’s Horror Anthology, The Unholy Trinity: A Collection of 99 Stories is practically Tales From The Crypt in book form. So much so that I expected a wisecracking skeleton puppet to pop up from the pages and start quoting ghoulish puns. 

Well that didn't happen but The Unholy Trinity carries many of the same great qualities that Crypt does: easy digestible stories of fears brought to life with spine tingling plots, graphic images, and engaging twists. These stories combine Wood's three previous horror anthologies, Caliginy, Phantasma, and Anathema. They are written to raise that slight chill in the back of the mind, the one that tells you that despite knowing that you are alone in the house while you read this book that maybe you should give that window, or that closet, or the door locks a second look. They remind us that watching horror is a fun and interesting pastime but reading horror lets your imagination fly off into dark and forbidden dimensions that turns your sleep into an unpleasant one.


All of the stories are terrifyingly well written and are certain to scare and delight the Reader but the best are: 



“A Bat Out of Hell”-Right out of the gate, the first story is a mesmerizing thrill ride of shocks, scares, and screams of fright. Carly goes to the County Fair with her boyfriend and just can’t resist the roller coaster called A Bat Out of Hell.


This story draws the Reader right in with its atmosphere that promises fun and adventure but hints at something else. The Fair should be fun but there is darkness. The description and tone remind the Reader that these rides may be exciting but they also dare riders to defy death by going too high or too fast inside metal contraptions put together and inspected by people that may not be entirely trustworthy. 


As if the regular suspense of a theme park isn’t bad enough, the roller coaster itself is far worse. The demonic Goth motif hints at its true intentions. There are bits of foreshadowing like the blood red seats and screams that sound less like the “fun to be scared” screams and more like the “being tortured and begging to be let go” screams. The final pages deliver the gore that reveals that this ride was literally meant to scare the Hell into you. 


“The Dance”-“The Dance” mixes subtlety and eroticism. Gillian, the Narrator is mesmerized by a seductive dancer named Vanessa who fills her with desire especially after the two dance together.


This story is filled with descriptions of Vanessa and her dancing. She is beautiful and otherworldly. Her hair, body, face, and figure give off the impression that she is almost too perfect. Gillian feels stirrings within her that she ignored because of fears of being outed but they are brought forward  the more she and Vanessa interact. 


 Vanessa awakens those longings that Gillian put away, the longings to be with someone without judgment, to be pleasured sexually and emotionally, and to feel that rush that one individual can bring to another individual. It is a truly erotic story that also serves as a metaphor for fulfilling one’s longings and living authentically. 


“The Inn By the Cemetery”- This is a delightful, creepy, and surprisingly romantic story about the past haunting the present. Modern couple Sharon and Mitch go on a romantic weekend getaway to historic bed-and-breakfast. While visiting a cemetery, Sharon picks up an old bracelet. Meanwhile, Mitch has unexplained dreams of the past and visions of a ghostly woman. 


This is a haunting, beautiful, and almost wistful story that delivers feelings of sorrow and uncertainty rather than fear. Sharon’s imagination is activated as she researches the past of the town for a book. The research consumes her to the point that she has trouble separating herself from the past. 


Meanwhile Mitch’s encounters with the past are found by esoteric means. The images of the ghostly woman aren’t really scary. They emphasize her sadness and isolation from the world of the living. She inspires empathy rather than scorn. The couple’s visit practically makes them the unwanted intrusions instead of the ghost.


“The Black Hole”-As many know some of the best anthology stories are ones that like to offer social commentary inside a memorable story. In this story, a group of young African-American men are invited to a paintball tournament by one’s white co-workers. The true intentions of the night are revealed as the men find themselves running for their lives.


This story is very reminiscent of Jordan Peele’s movies by turning a supernatural occurrence into an insightful commentary on racism. The players are evenly divided in strength and athleticism but the white players have advantage over their black counterparts because they know the true meaning behind the game. The weapons become more realistic and the game becomes bloodier and more violent as we peer into the dark hearts of those playing it. 


The black men try to strategize and work together to survive the night and maybe even fight their assailants. It’s truly gut wrenching as they get taken out one by one because they live within a system that does not value them as people. They are regarded by their hunters as nothing more than targets meant to be slaughtered. 


“The Keeper of Souls”-This story is similar to a dark fairy tale that personifies Death as an actual being. The Narrator has been haunted by a creature that he calls The Keeper of Souls. Now at age 88, he fears that the Keeper is coming for him.


The Keeper’s dark clothing and silent demeanor deliver a slight chill. The overall impression is that of a character that you can barely see out of the corner of your eye and swear he was there a second ago. Then upon closer inspection, he’s gone at least according to your eyes. But somewhere in your heart, you know he’s still there watching and waiting. 


The Keeper is like one of those fair folk who operate on their own rules and standards. He collects souls, that’s what he does. He no more has any feeling or compunction about it than he does about the heads that he carries. He is not someone who can be reasoned with, challenged, or argued against. He just is. 


“Dear Monique”-This story is brilliant at subversion and shifting the Reader’s thoughts towards and then away from the characters. A long letter recounts the friendship between Monique and the narrator, Christine. 


Christine’s narrative starts out sweet and nostalgic. She captures various moments that solidified the friendship between the two women through school, marriage, and motherhood. There is at first a sisterly bond between them that appears unbreakable. It’s sweet until we remember that sisterhood can have negative qualities as well as positives. For every March Sisters there are also Cinderella and her Wicked Stepsisters.


The letter takes a severe turn as Christine’s memories become more fragmented, darker, and more accusatory. Buried resentment and envy come forward and the two friends confront one another in a tragic conclusion. At first, it seems abrupt and jarring but upon closer inspection, the letter reveals that there was always something brewing under the surface of this friendship. Their end isn’t a surprise as it is inevitable.


“Baie Rouge”-This story is a continuation of and sequel to “The Dance” by carrying many of the same themes of sexual attraction and undying love. Sandra remembers her relationship with Vickie and still mourns her death. One night during her grief, Sandra gets a surprise visitor that completely changes her outlook.


The couple are very close and Sandra’s memories are pleasant. She recalls Vicki’s positive and negative qualities cherishing those former times as a means of holding onto her deceased lover. Sandra makes Vicki a real person and not a caricature or a model of perfection. That makes her death all the sadder. 


The resolution is easy to predict but at the same time intriguing. Because of what we are told about their relationship, the results are not something to be feared. Instead it is seen as a triumph. 


“To Die A Fool”-Like “The Black Hole,” this is social commentary wrapped inside an engaging story. Only this time religion is given this bitter satiric treatment. A religious man finds his  beliefs tested when confronted with his own mortality.


This story is a savage and brutal takedown of religion and the willful blindness that it sometimes brings. The Narrator spends the first few pages trying to convince the Reader that his faith is constant and unyielding. He arrogantly describes his devotion almost to the point of parody.


The final pages counters the Narrator’s view and give him an ironic hell. It’s a complete contrast to what he talked about without understanding. It forces him to look at himself and learn that his religious behavior was just simply surface without substance. 


“Last Request”-Some of the darker stories in this anthology takes the Readers into the mind of characters who are human and far more dangerous than any supernatural entity. Willie Dean Campbell sits on death row awaiting his last meal and execution.


Campbell’s story is one of using violent means to satisfy one’s cravings and desires. He is written as someone who has a hunger that needs another thrill to satisfy it. Those thrills start out minor and then get progressively worse. He is inhuman as he looks at his victims as simply means to satisfy those longings.


The most troubling aspects of this story are revealed when Campbell admits that he didn’t come upon his homicidal tendencies on his own. In fact, they were drilled into him by his mother. She created the desire and the cravings and got him started on the path. Campbell just simply followed it to its obvious conclusion. 


“One Night Stand”-Some of these stories are flash fiction and have only one page or even a few sentences to capture a mood. In this one, a woman contemplates the aftereffects of a murder.


Despite the short length, Wood manages to capture a truly diabolical situation. The description is extraordinarily graphic and evocative in its violence. In a few short sentences a nightmare is created.


The final sentence is meaningful enough to be a twist ending. In this brief story, we learn as much about the characters and their situation as we would have if we had been given more pages. 


“Issue”-This story is one that many authors may relate to, especially when their characters seem so real. While writing his latest mystery novel, Maurice White seems to feel the presence of Charlie Carver, his protagonist. 


The story begins with many creepy moments like when Maurice begins speaking in the accent that he gave Charlie and taking on some of his mannerisms. He is afraid to look in the mirror or go about his daily activities because he thinks that he will see Charlie appear to him.. As the snippets of Maurice’s novel are meant to keep his readers in suspense, Maurice’s journey does the same to us. The Reader isn’t sure if Charlie’s fears are justified or we are reading the thought process of a paranoid schizophrenic. Is Charlie a fictional character or an alter ego that Maurice tries to suppress but is begging to come forward. Or more than likely could both be simultaneously true?


The ending spins the story in a different direction from entering the mindscape of a writer to blurring the lines between the real world in which they live and the fictional world that they create. Charlie Carver takes on a more demonic persona as he confronts his author. He is unfinished because his story is and he demands a resolution. This story shows that people, authors especially, can create their own demons and are often at their mercy. 


“Noon”-This story takes a trip into panic during the end of the world. The Narrator searches through a zombie apocalypse for his brother, Corey.


The story captures the panic and tension that one would have in a situation where their entire world has ended. The Narrator recalls the moments when  the creatures attacked the humans and chaos ensued. He’s still in shock and denial trying to reconcile the world that he once knew with the one before him. This leaves him defenseless when he isn’t adequately prepared for the new normal. All he can do is find his brother and hide. 


The tension contrasts with the Narrator’s feelings towards Corey. His memories of the two raising each other and sticking together through hardships fill him with hope. He hangs onto those memories because they are all that he has. He wants to think of Corey as the man that he once was and not a corpse or worse. That hope turns to despair and fear when he realizes that the times have changed his brother too.


“Patty”-Unlike many of the stories in the anthology that  cannot be found in reality, this one explores a monster that is very human and unfortunately very common. In this one, Patty recalls her unhappy and abusive marriage to her husband, Troy and the violence that ensued from it.


Who needs ghosts, demonic roller coasters, and zombie apocalypses when the fear of domestic violence is all too present and real? Patty’s marriage starts out badly even before the ceremony when she overhears Troy make disparaging comments about  her appearance. Troy’s abuse towards Patty escalates from sharp criticisms, to outright insults, to gaslighting, to physical and sexual violence. The characters fall into a pattern that is frequently echoed in reality. 


The worst part about the abuse is the toll that it takes on Patty. When we read about her, she is a faded withered woman who is deprived of the ability to think for herself because of the erosion of her self-esteem. She wears clothing, fixes her hair, and manages the household in ways that he approves of. She is not even allowed the privacy of her own thoughts without his domineering voice and harsh hands entering her mind. As with many abuse victims, she has lost the ability to fight him and in this case her obsession to please him takes on violent proportions. However, the story makes us side with her because Patty is not the monster. Troy is. He took her identity, mind, independence, self-respect, and left behind an empty shell. He did far more damage than any zombie ever could.


“Idol”-Many of these stories are at their core about obsessions, but none explore that concept more than this one. In a long monologue, Iris recounts her obsession for a famous woman to the point that she wants to look like her and goes to desperate lengths to achieve her goal.


The story straddles the line between darkly comic and extremely grotesque,  Iris talks about her injuries and body mutilations like they are a day at the spa. She is alarmingly nonchalant about the fact that her complexion is burnt to a crisp,, that her hair and eyebrows are gone because of disastrous dying techniques, and parts of her skin has been hacked off to trim the fat. It’s terrifying and pathetic to imagine this poor woman putting herself through such torture to look like her idol.


This story is a commentary on the beauty industry and the lengths that people, especially women, go through to look perfect. In a world where eating disorders, plastic surgery addiction, compulsive shopping, and images and videos that exploit insecurities in the name of beauty are all too common, are Iris’ actions really that far off? Many destroy themselves to obtain a perfect image that doesn’t exist, that never existed. They just don’t do it as graphically as Iris does. 


“Abstract”-If Art can capture life, then it can capture death too and that is what is explored here. Matthew and Cameron go to an art exhibit from a controversial artist whose paintings leave quite an impression on those who observe them.


The story starts out like one of those urban legends. Matthew and Cameron debate about the stories that they heard that they swore happened to a friend of a friend. Like other urban legends, this set up opens up a real fear but puts a story around it that is hard to believe. We may not believe the legend, but it scares us all the same. 


Things take a turn when the duo look at the painting. It is not described very much, just in splashes of colors. It’s an abstract which one may look at in any museum and  ponder its meaning, but leave it behind in pursuit of other works. With this one, it’s not so much the painting itself but how it makes the viewer feel. There is a haunting creeping coldness that symbolizes death. It can’t be expressed into words and barely into visuals beyond an abstract. It can only be felt and as it is felt, it remains. 


“Skin”-”Folie a deux” means shared psychosis and is particularly felt among two or more people who work together to commit crimes. In this story, Karen, a former psychiatric nurse, recalls her troubled obsessive relationship with Jeremy, a patient.


Karen and Jeremy are like many killer couples, most notably The Joker and Harley Quinn. They fill a need for each other and those needs often end in murder. Jeremy lives for his obsessions and addictions that are only satisfied by killing and devouring his enemies. He lives on emotion and impulse and doesn’t care who he hurts. 


Karen on the other hand is smarter and more methodical and calculating. She delivers certain things and pays favors to Jeremy to earn his trust. Then when she has it, she becomes an accomplice to his deeds. While Jeremy is not personally invested in the people he attacks, Karen is. She has a specific target in mind and puts them right in Jeremy’s path. In some ways, that makes her worse than Jeremy. He may live totally in darkness but she can control it. 


“Worthington Court”-This is reminiscent of those old ghost stories or campfire tales about that person or that area in town which are cursed. In this story, the cursed area is Worthington Court and the only person who knows its dark devastating secret is Alma Roberson, a 96 year old resident who reveals the secret to Henry Goode, a skeptical historian.


There is a nostalgic old world quality to this story, the kind which is shared by a storyteller to their listeners. Alma tells the story with a compelling narrative that captures both history and horror. She tells it in a way that makes you want to listen even though you are afraid of the ending. 


The story has a parallel point of view from Henry. After Alma finishes her story, he researches it to determine the veracity. He  methodically and thoroughly searches archives, town records, newspaper articles, census reports. He is convinced that he knows the truth. He forgets that there is something out there that resists being researched and can’t be analyzed or understood by academic means. 


“Detour”-This story has one of the usual stock endings found in horror but the journey to get there can’t be missed. Stuck in traffic, Cheryl takes a detour along the mysterious Palatial Lane only to get the fright of her life. 


“Detour” is almost hypnotic as it describes the long drive with the roads and endless traffic. It’s meant to put the Reader and Cheryl into a false sense of monotony during an everyday situation in which we are all too familiar. 


Palatial Lane is purposely the opposite of its name. Cheryl expects a wealthy road with big mansions, manicured lawns, and fancy cars. Instead, she finds an unkempt wood, old houses, dead grass, and an overall sense of abandonment. It is a place that fills her with fear and loathing and only towards the end does she realize that her fears are justified. 


“The Morning After’-This is another flash fiction which takes two sentences to capture a mood, a thrilling creepy mood. A woman hears a singer’s voice on the radio and it causes her mind to wander to a specific memory.


In the brief time in which we are given, we are told what we need to know about the woman, the singer, and what happened. The information that we are given gives us the important details and lets our minds wander about the rest. We don’t know who they are, the motives, or what led to it. That is left to the imagination. All that is known is something horrible happened and the Woman is not at all remorseful. In fact, she is jubilant.


“A Glimpse”-This is a very strange story which leaves a lot to the imagination. A woman is frightened by the appearance of a stranger but there may be more to this stranger than she thought.


We aren’t given a long story, just a few paragraphs. Most of it is devoted to the woman’s theories about this figure so it’s hard to tell what is real and what isn’t. This adds to the ominous feeling throughout. 


We are led to believe one thing, but then we are told something else that pivots us into another direction. In the end we aren’t given any clear answers and are left with the unknown. In a way that’s what makes it scarier. We are left to our own interpretations and to make our own conclusions. 

Friday, June 21, 2024

Virtuous Women by Ann Goltz; Contemporary Literature Novel Skewers Religion, Cults, and Restrictive Traditional Gender Roles


 Virtuous Women by Ann Goltz; Contemporary Literature Novel Skewers Religion, Cults, and Restrictive Traditional Gender Roles

By Julie Sara Porter

Bookworm Reviews 

Spoilers: Now we return to a favorite topic of this blog: Religion and Religious Cults. The Quiverfull Movement is a Christian theological position which encourages marital procreation with the intent to create large families. Its followers abstain from contraceptives, family planning, and sterilization reversal. Among the most famous, or rather infamous, adherents are Jim Bob and Michelle Duggar of reality television fame. 

Virtuous Women by Ann Goltz is a brilliant Contemporary Literature Novel that skewers religious cults and the Quiverfull Movement by showing the detrimental effect that they have on the women who are involved within them. In a time when women’s rights are eroding because of interference from Christian Evangelicals, the dangers that such a strict environment can bring cannot be stressed enough. 

Hope Wagner is the oldest girl in a religious family of ten children. Because of her status, she has to fill the motherly role towards caring for her younger siblings left by the death of their mother. However she is soon to approach the marrying age of 18 and her father, Michael will be left without a housekeeper. The elders of the Church of the Covenant order Michael to get remarried and they have the perfect candidate. Enter Jennifer Levine, a newcomer to the Church from an outsider background.

Goltz’s writing is brilliant with how she captures how people fall into such Fundamentalism and how people can be destroyed when they religiously (pun not intended) follow such a path.What is fascinating about the first half of the book is that the Church of the Covenant seems deceptively alright.

If you read a lot of Inspirational Fiction or watch a lot of Hallmark Holiday Rom Coms, you might recognize the pattern: Big city career woman with secret longing for a simple life finds herself in a cute old fashioned town with good old fashioned values. She meets a handsome rugged salt-of-the-earth local, usually a widower with children. Complications ensue but she decides to ditch her old life behind, stay in the town, marry the local, and conform to his ways. Expect quirky locals, beautiful natural settings, a sob story about the couple in question, detailed Holiday seasons, and definitely a trip or two or three to church to remind you that yes these are Faith-driven locals. 

That's all present in Virtuous Women, but something seems off about it. The Wagners seem at first like a decent family albeit very strict. Some details like the kids being home schooled could be attributed to their Conservative upbringing. They seem to be in a community whose members genuinely look out for and communicate with each other. Michael might be stern but he is honest and appears free of religious hypocrisy. 

 In this fast paced world of immediate gratification, ever present technology, and gloomy and doom-driven news, it's understandable why someone like Jennifer would want to be a part of this life, especially someone like Jennifer.

Jennifer is the type of modern woman who has the past in a nostalgia filter. She reads Classic Literature and wears vintage clothing. She works as a nanny and secretly resents her employer’s affluent attention seeking lifestyle. Her career driven parents were more interested in obtaining wealth and status than parenting. She is the type probably much like many of her Readers, who would like to go into a time machine, travel to the past, and stay there. But her vision of the past is not the same as the reality.

There are some early red flags that suggest that life in this Church isn't all that was originally advertised. Those signs are designed to make the hair stand on the back of the mind and eyes narrow in suspicion wondering what Jennifer is getting herself into.

 There's an early moment where Hope is assaulted on her way home from grocery shopping and her father blames her for the attack. There is the moment where Jennifer enters the church wearing period clothing but one that is too ornate and showy for the plain clothes congregation. There are plans to marry Hope off right away to Joel, a young man who comes from another family of believers even though she's only 18 and her younger sisters are also preparing for their future weddings. One of the biggest warnings occurs after Jennifer uses her money to buy her future stepdaughter’s wedding dresses and Michael becomes furious and physically violent, accusing Jennifer of violating his commands as the man of the house. They are present and definitely can't be ignored. It doesn't take long for Jennifer to realize that she may have gotten the old fashioned life that she thought that she wanted but she also got all that came with it including Christian Nationalism and subjugation towards women.

Jennifer is an example of someone from the outside who stumbles into a cult where everything is new and fresh to her and all rules have to be explained. Since she is so new, she questions everything around her when her suspicions and concerns manifest themselves. She sees a patriarchal system where women are second class citizens. Where God's love and forgiveness is minimized and his judgemental wrath and punishment are emphasized. Where education is limited to only what the church allows to be taught and advancement is diminished for boys and practically non-existent for girls. Where distrust in the government is so high that they don't go to hospitals even if they're dying or seek welfare when they are starving. Where girls are raised solely to be wives and mothers and are ordered to breed lots of children and have no choice in the matter. Once Jennifer realizes the dangers that she has gotten herself into, she begins to look for a way out.

Jennifer may have been thrust into the Church of the Covenant but another character reveals the pain of having been born into it: Hope who, after Jennifer leaves the book, becomes the primary protagonist. She had been raised by her father and the Church and never knew any other life. Her brainwashing began so early that she doesn't acknowledge that's what it is. Every time she mildly questions her upbringing, slightly disagrees with the lessons being taught, or considers a career in midwifery, she believes that she is sinning and that she needs to pray and read the Bible to seek attrition. She isn't even allowed the freedom to disagree or think for herself in her own mind. Her father's church has her convinced that as a woman, she is a weak vessel who needs to be controlled and made submissive.

Those nagging worrisome doubts that came into Hope’s head and then disappeared come to surface with the arrival of Jennifer and her subsequent marriage to her father. Suddenly those doubts come in a human form that becomes a catalyst for Hope finding her own independence. She sees the life that she has complacently accepted as one that imprisons and restrains those within it. The seemingly charming old fashioned plot gives way to something darker, more sinister, and more realistic than the life Jennifer imagined and Hope lived with every day.

With such a savage take down of cults, I sort of expected the book to climax in a violent and bloodthirsty manner which resulted in the death of the cult. That is not actually what happens. The cult instead destroys itself. It is destroyed from within as young members grow up and break free from their programming and older members refuse to go beyond their rigid beliefs to accommodate and adapt to the changing world.  

The Wagner Family themselves implode as the children fall into early death, domestic violence, unwanted pregnancy, estrangement, elopement, and rebellion. Some leave and then come back penitent. Others settle into unhappy marriages in which they outwardly follow the values in which they were raised but now makes them inwardly miserable. They become aware that their rigid religious upbringing left them unprepared for the world and in many ways was responsible for the troubles in which they found themselves. 

The only way that some of the Wagner Children can receive any type of fulfillment and contentment is to leave the Church and their family and make a clean break from the way of life in which they were raised. 

Virtuous Women is the type of book that reminds us that religion can be a good thing in small doses but for all too many, it is used as a means of control and oppression. Sometimes the most courageous, faithful, and virtuous thing that a person can do is live outside of and out speak against it.