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Sunday, March 8, 2026

The Imperfect Hand of Fate by Wade Monk; The Balance of Evil by Kim Rozdeba, and Obsessed with Change: A Look at the Future From the Beginning by Cecil W. Lee

 The Imperfect Hand of Fate by Wade Monk; The Balance of Evil by Kim Rozdeba, and Obsessed with Change: A Look at the Future From the Beginning by Cecil W. Lee

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 

The Imperfect Hand of Fate by Wade Monk 

This review is a summary. The longer version is on LitPick

Wade Monk crafts an effective Suspense Thriller with The Imperfect Hand of Fate. He uses the dual narratives to their fullest exploring an elaborate spy game from the point of view of someone in the exact center and someone on the outside but becomes greatly affected.

There are two stories being told in this novel, set primarily in 1960’s Georgia. The first is that of Haskell Hand, a teenager, who sees a mysterious man acting strangely at the library where he volunteers. Every week at the same time, the man reads copies of The Constitution, the local newspaper, and the same copies of the same books and leaves after a few seconds of searching. Haskell’s curiosity about the man, dubbed Mr. Constitution, is a relief from Haskell's personal stress and boredom with small town life in De Soto, Georgia. 

The second story is that of Daryl Timmons, the aforementioned Mr. Constitution, a former American GI who was imprisoned by the Soviets during his time in the Korean War. He is forced to spy against his country for the safety of his wife and daughter. The spy games are greatly detailed as he is surrounded by betrayal and dividing loyalties.

In many ways, Haskell and Daryl are foils for each other. They are at different stages in life as a teenager and adult respectively but feel trapped by circumstances. Daryl’s trap however is a literal one while Haskell's is figurative. Haskell is trapped by poverty. He is the subject of derision because of a prank that he caused. Financial constraints keep him from pursuing higher education.

He also has familial pressure. His mother died and he doesn't get along with the surviving family members particularly his disabled brother, Elliot. His prank appears not to be a cry for attention but a cry from a boy who is under pressure and is on the verge of cracking. The Mystery of Mr. Constitution distracts him because it requires an answer.

Daryl is someone that is also surrounded by physical and psychological stress. He was graphically tortured during the Korean War. He is retrained to be a double agent in a Soviet program imitating a typical American town and whose agents assume American identities to infiltrate the United States. 

Daryl marries in Russia and fathers a daughter. His handlers force him to return to his home country as a spy and saboteur. He has become embittered and only cares about his family’s safety. He will betray his country to keep his family safe. 

Haskell and Daryl's stories parallel in many ways but unfortunately, never fully connect. However, they are connected thematically as two men trapped in circumstances beyond their control and are trying to find some sense in a world that has deprived them of their free will and ability to fully change those circumstances.





Balance of Evil by Kim Rozdeba

This review is a summary. The longer version is on Reader Views.

Kim Rozdeba’s novel Balance of Evil is a compelling political thriller that combines the intricate details of a wide-spread conspiracy and the intimate poignancy of a family drama.

Retired businessman Scott Barton stumbles upon a USB flash drive with contents that reveal a sophisticated and secret weapons program between the USA and Russia for decades called FIST. After opening it, Scott and his wife, Colleen, are followed by sinister figures in black helicopters and unmarked cars. 
Scott is naturally terrified of this situation of going from mild mannered executive to fugitive on the run from government agents trying to kill him. He is frightened but confused, particularly about his wife who seems to know more about this situation than she is letting on.

The way the FIST conspiracy is depicted makes for very engaging reading. Scott's discovery of the flash drive seems arbitrary but once we are given the full situation, it makes more sense. Scott, his family, and their allies are aware that they are laser focused mostly on one specific organization and one leader. This organization is simply one part of the decades of hidden agenda, secrets, underhanded deals, and tyranny. Getting rid of one leader can only do so much.

By far the most heartfelt aspect of the book is the family drama that is equal to and sometimes more prominent to the conspiracy aspects. Scott is a naive noob thrown into an unknown world but surprisingly adapts well to it. This experience opens Scott’s eyes towards Colleen who is a seasoned pro at espionage situations. Scott is at first confused about his wife's separate life and upset by her deception in covering it. But as he is pulled further into her world, he begins to admire the strength and resilience that she had in living within it. It makes him love her even more.

Scott and Colleen are forced to recognize their real selves that are behind the disguises of a normal exterior life and live solely within the reality of a duplicitous interior life. Questions of whether the family unit can remain intact under these discoveries and the subsequent actions abound. 







Obsession With Change: A Look at the Future From The Beginning by Cecil W. Lee

Cecil W. Lee’s short Science Fiction novel/coffee table book, Obsession With Change: A Look at the Future From the Beginning effectively combines both AI and the human element. Lee collaborated with an AI entity named Lahneer to write the book and the illustrations are human originated by Lee who gave instructions to AI. The combination of styles gives a striking combination of human and AI creativity. 

The book is actually a series of short concepts, stories, and fictionalized interviews with figures from the future talking about their daily lives and conflicts. Each chapter also features illustrations that explore the concepts within the text. 

The book describes character’s experiences with futuristic body art, CRISPR genetic engineering, holographic sex, robot artists and musicians, body modifications, AI performed surgery, augmentation, interstellar travel, cybernetic replacements, cryopreservation, neuroplasticity, synthetic mind, and autonomy protocol. 

The book gives short accounts of characters living in the future and how they experience this world around them. Among them are Elara Masaki who goes through a CRISPR procedure to have a pair of wings inserted on her back, KX-91 a robot artist who is gaining attention from the critics, and Solar Callaway a hoverboard champion who is drafted into receiving cyberbiotic augmentation and going on an interstellar mission to explore a distant planet. 

Unlike many anthologies, it’s really difficult to discern which I would consider favorites in this book. These aren’t completed short stories so much as they are snippets or sketches of what could potentially be larger stories in one continuous shared universe. 

The book is intriguing both in text and images. The text being told through a series of articles, interviews, and short essays gives the work a meta style and makes one feel that they are not reading a fictional work but perhaps a dry fact based account from the year 2091 catching Readers up to the latest news. In its own way, that approach can be immersive. 

These are all potentially interesting ideas and it would be nice if Lee explored them further in longer stories and novels. The snippets only offer a glimpse of this futuristic world that is so distant chronologically but at the time seems so familiar because we are in the early stages.
Perhaps we can get more insight into why Elara wants a pair of wings, what Solar experiences in his travels, and who influences and inspires KX-91’s art.

The illustrations are AI style and while many shun AI art for very good reason, this is a book where it kind of works. Since the writing style acts like it is set in the future, there is no reason to assume the illustrations wouldn’t be either. KX-91’s story in particular benefits from this as we see the art produced by a futuristic fictional robot but actually created by a present AI program and originated by a human author. They are both eerie with that uncanny valley feel that modern AI art produces but also evocative in capturing emotions from a being that shouldn't have any.




Friday, November 5, 2021

Weekly Reader: Effacement by Hieronymus Hawkes; Suspenseful Tech Heavy Science Fiction Chase Thriller That is All Too Timely

 



Weekly Reader: Effacement by Hieronymus Hawkes; Suspenseful Tech Heavy Science Fiction Chase Thriller That is All Too Timely

By Julie Sara Porter

Bookworm Reviews


Spoilers: This is yet another book that I am reading that has familiar echoes in reality. Where the fictional situation which is being explored is also discussed in the real world outside the book.


Just as I am reading Effacement by Hieronymus Hawkes, a science fiction tech thriller in which everyone's information is displayed for all the world to see and privacy is non-existent, Mark Zuckerberg, CEO and founder of Facebook (well Meta now) is being held under scrutiny by a whistleblower who called Zuckerberg and the social media giant out regarding targeting children as potential users, not addressing national security concerns, and using algorithms to intentionally spread false information and hate speech. 

 Other concerns facing the social media empire include a lack of privacy, censoring accurate but critical information, and interfering with elections.


In Hawkes' version, the tech industry goes one step further. Instead of posting all of the information on the Internet through social media so people can voluntarily peruse such data, the data is transmitted inside people's brains through a device called Lifelog. Lifelog stores where they were born, their address, what they ate, who they hung out with, general health, where they shopped, and where they are. They are connected through a neurochip based network, called Vitasync, and the information can be viewed with AR glasses. Since the network is connected through the brain, there is so none of that messy computer or mobile device necessity to deal with.


 In fact it is illegal to be without the neurochip. The crime is called effacement and is usually resolved by the sinisterly named Federal Department of Fidelity.

That is the situation faced by Cole Westbay, the protagonist who wakes up with sharp severe pain, a splitting headache, and no access to Lifelog. He isn't effaced (is that even a word in this universe?) by choice but he is treated like he is and will soon be facing trial. Eventually, he finds himself on the run, reaching the interest of his former company, his fiancee Tesla, the FDF, and a resistance group that chooses to live without the Vitasync.


Effacement is one of those science fiction novels that is so prevalent and so intriguing because it is so prescient. With books like this, Reality Testing, and Centricity warning about the abuses of technology and the Internet, right at the same time that tech companies are under suspicion for such misuse is alarmingly familiar.

Effacement's version of tech is like the current tech CEO's times 10. Big Brother isn't just watching you. He's watching everyone else too and probably dancing horribly to Tick Tock while laughing at cat videos.

With the current issues concerning the tech industry and a book like Effacement, it almost makes you want to log off permanently and become a Luddite. 

I said almost. I work from home, in a job that I love, that I would not be able to do in person. Plus, I am aware that I am reading an ebook, one of several, that I purchased from Amazon on a Kindle device, am writing a review for a blog, and will soon be sharing the review on social media platforms, Facebook and Twitter, so the irony does not escape me.


Cole is the typical protagonist that can be found in this genre: quiet, unassuming, sardonic on the inside but not much of a rebel on the outside. Since his injury occurs right before we are introduced to him, we don't experience Cole as a cooperative member of the system. He has OCD and is an addict, probably to cope with this tech heavy world around him where the nights and days seem to have a thousand eyes.

Instead, we see him after he has forcibly been yanked from the system and he doesn't know why. Mostly, we get inferences towards his previous behavior such as his job in R&D in which he and his boss have a mentor-protege relationship and his engagement with Tesla, in which he is getting irritated with her narcissism. He gets irritated with the world around him but doesn't think about it until he is removed from it and forced to look at the Vitasync-less world.


Even Cole's reasons for even considering joining the resistance are more self involved than altruistic. He is attracted to Eva, one of the Resistors, by her physical appearance more than swayed by her sound arguments. Even after he gets to know her, he is mostly interested in her for being an attorney that exclusively works with those who have been effaced, so she can plead for his defense. It is only after he goes to the resistance hideout and sees a world of nature, sincere people, and  alone time with his thoughts that he actually wants to help for the larger picture of a life without Lifelog.


There are some moments that really stand out for Cole's character. One of them is after his Vitasync is removed. He feels pain as though someone's arm has been severed. It is a threatening experience which reveals in its intensity how it feels to be suddenly caught off from society and not by choice. For Cole, it is pure physical and mental torture like going through a drug withdrawal.

The other moments are when he is at the Resistance's hideout. He sees a farm where people work with their hands and are very cooperative. There are some humorous passages like when he rides a snowmobile for the first time and becomes violently ill. Throughout this journey, Cole is almost like a kid at Christmas experiencing real joy for the first time. 


This book is for the most part great but there are some flaws. The content is very tech heavy and sometimes difficult to follow when the Reader is trying to see through the tech talk to get to the story. It's ironic that a book that is so critical of the reaches of technology would be so enamored in describing it. I suppose like this Reader who could not avoid using technology to share her thoughts about this book, Hawkes can't avoid getting lost in the details in writing about it.


The other flaw cannot just be found in science fiction but in other genres, that of explaining too much in the beginning, leaving out much suspense and speculation. There is a prologue dealing with an FDF agent that spells out exactly what his role is and why he stalks Cole later. 

More egregious is an early chapter involving two characters that not only reveal why Cole's neurochip had been removed but that of a far reaching conspiracy. This makes the two character's motives questionable even as they claim that they are helping Cole.

 It also keeps the Reader ahead of Cole which since he is our protagonist, we shouldn't be that far ahead in knowledge. This exposition isn't necessary for the overall story and is clunky rather than compelling. Instead this important chapter could have been presented much later in flashbacks or through one character explaining what happened. As it is, there is less interest in Cole's journey as he stumbles looking for answers that we already know. At times, he comes across looking like an idiot for trusting characters that we know are not trustworthy.


Despite its glaring flaws, Effacement is a suspenseful and timely warning about how far we could go to be connected. It could happen just as quickly as tomorrow.