Sunday, July 28, 2024

August's Reading List


 August’s Reading List 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 



The Mantis Variant (Book 1: The Mantis Gland) by Adam Andrews Johnson 

Girl in the Corn (Girl in the Corn Book 1)by Jason Offutt 

Said the Spider to the Fly by Findlay Ward

Tales of Whiskey Tango from Misery Towers by James Aylott

Lunar Nationals: Alpha Squad by V.S. Hall

Gingered: A Memoir by Ryan G. Murphy 

Cat's Cradle by Carly Rheilan

When Banana Stains Fade by Frances-Marie Coke

Red Gifts in the Garden of Stones by Pam Swanborough

* Debunked by Beth Perry

Retribution by Ian Conner 

Immortal Water by Brian Van Norman


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The Others (Book 1 in the Council Trilogy) by Evette Davis; Blue by Charles Keatts; The Blind Smith (Book 1 in the Forge Trilogy in The Shadow Guardian Series) by G. Russell Gaynor; Eveningstar: Awakening by Samantha Curl

 The Others (Book 1 in the Council Trilogy) by Evette Davis; Blue by Charles Keatts; The Blind Smith (Book 1 in the Forge Trilogy in The Shadow Guardian Series) by G. Russell Gaynor; Eveningstar: Awakening by Samantha Curl 



The Others (Book 1 in The Council Trilogy) by Evette Davis

The entire review can be found on LitPick.

Evette Davis’ The Others is an intriguing concept that is illustrated with intrinsic copious details that fully explores it.

Political consultant Olivia Shepherd is suffering from a professional crisis when she encounters Elsa, a spirit called a Time Walker. Elsa informs her that her rival, Stoner Halbert has made a deal with a demon and is using that influence to grab power. As if that's not enough there is a hidden society called The Others: vampires, fairies, witches, ghosts, and other creatures. They live alongside our own and affect the human world around them. Olivia has some untapped abilities and must use them and her newfound friendships within the Others community to make some important political changes of their own, ones that will benefit humans and Otherkind not dominate it as Halbert wants to do.

The Others Society is captured brilliantly because it seems so much like the normal 21st century human society. The Others live in houses, have regular jobs, and go about their daily lives.

Once she is introduced to the concept, Olivia realizes that she is surrounded by The Others. Her best friend Lily, a teacher, is a fairy. William, a musician whom Olivia begins a relationship with, is a vampire. Gabriel, a multi billionaire who mentors Olivia, is a witch and so on.

There are also some other interesting facets to the plot. William and Olivia begin a tentative romance that is conflicted by differing views but a strong emotional and physical connection.

The political landscape is adequately explored and has some very timely relevance in an already eventful Presidential election year.

The Others takes a fascinating concept and lets the imagination run wild with it.

Blue by Charles Keatts


Blue by Charles Keatts is not an easy book to read. It's confusing, rambling, and disjointed, but it is also honest, introspective, and real. It shows the mental decline of a creative artist who is losing himself to addiction, depression, disconnection, and the despair felt by the people around him.


The Narrator mostly ruminates on his struggles and those of the people around him. They are highly artistic and highly troubled. There's Robert, a music critic, who falls into addiction and various love affairs. His painter friend, Ann soothes herself with heroin. The Narrator, a novelist and poet, has flashbacks of his unhappy youth and is overcome with depression, manic thoughts, and alcoholism. Other names and situations float through the book and disappear quickly as the Narrator’s sanity spirals.


This book is not an easy read. The narrative is confusing, repetitive, jumps from one point of view to another, and rambles on with little to no point. At times it comes across as boring. It tries for a stream of consciousness narration ala James Joyce or Virginia Woolf and sometimes it works but often it doesn't.


Blue works by capturing the slipping sanity of a brilliant but unraveling mind. The Narrator can't keep his thoughts together so it shows in the chapters. He repeats himself, tangles his thoughts, forgets names and places. Even his descriptions of Robert and Ann are causes for concern because The Narrator purposely leaves information out. It is unclear who Robert and Ann even are in his life. Are they friends of his? Is he Robert? Are they parts of his psyche? Fictional characters whose conflicts bleed into his own? We don't know and it is left to interpretation.


At times however, the narration is too complex and pretentious for its own good.

Blue contrasts with another recent book, blue: season by Chris Lombardi which also captures a stream of consciousness narration but does it better than Blue. blue: season is also narrated by a character who is a genius but has a fractured mind but this is a book with a character and plot. It doesn't lose focus so it can tell a good story along with a smart introspective narrative. We care about the characters and want to explore this strange journey into one woman's struggle with mental illness and traumatic memories of her past.


Blue on the other hand is more concerned with showing off the narration than putting it together in a book. It's hard to understand who the Narrator is or who the other characters are partly because of the limited perspective. We only see everyone through the Narrator's eyes. They all live miserable lives and that's it. The bleakness overpowers and since The Narrator jumps around, we can't really know the characters beyond mere sketches. The misery just piles on them without any full understanding of who they are as people or a reason why we should care about them when they reach rock bottom.


Blue is hard to comprehend and sometimes hard to care about, but it is an introspective and honest book about a brilliant mind that is falling apart. As those around him suffer from their own problems, he has to deal with his own heartaches and disappointments. The Narrator lives inside his own head and finds solace in his writing. If in fact, Robert and Ann are fictional characters that he created, he is perhaps using their addictions and psychological problems to confront or even avoid his own. 


As his life and the other's collapse, The Narrator who once found solace in his own mind can no longer trust it. He completely retreats into the fragmented remains in his mind as they slip away into nothingness. 


The Blind Smith (Book 1 in the Forge Trilogy in The Shadow Guardian Series) by G. Russell Gaynor


Note: This book was not selected because of current events. This schedule was made beforehand. Use caution when reading this review.


Even though G. Russell Gaynor’s The Blind Smith is 112 pages, it is a tightly wound and taut thriller about betrayal, revenge, and using one's own abilities and power to get that revenge.


An assassin blinds teen tech billionaire John J.J. Moore and kills members of his security team. He is taken in by Bob, a mysterious figure who teaches the young man how to be an assassin. Within a few years, J.J. excels in his training and recruits some new assassins to help him plan his revenge on the people who attacked him and killed his friends.


The opening chapter begins with a violent attack and there are some other subsequent action oriented chapters. However, the emphasis in this book is on gathering intelligence and planning strategies. Fighting harder takes a backseat to fighting smarter.


J.J. is particularly skilled in the whole “fighting smarter” mindset. He fits the description of someone who “plays 3D chess while his opponents play checkers.” In the beginning of the book, he is taught to use his other senses to become a formidable fighter ala Daredevil.


This style not only sharpens his physical strength but his mental strength too. He almost obtains a second sight and awareness into his allies and opponents's thoughts and actions.


With J.J.’s physical strength and analytical prowess, he is more than formidable against his enemies. Half way through the book only a few years into his training, he is already recruiting and leading his own groups. He picks into his protegee’s desires for revenge and anger at being wronged.


He helps his new recruits channel their anger into being a fighting team that makes up for the deficiencies that he lacks. They will be his force for revenge over the enemies who attacked him and the traitors that allowed it.


The Blind Smith is a brilliant game between a genius who is conditioned to fight and those who he is conditioned to fight against.





Eveningstar: Awakening by Samantha Curl 

Samantha Curl’s first Eveningstar novel, Awakening, skillfully tells three separate stories with the same characters. Curl then entwines them into one wide reaching expansive Epic High Fantasy that passes through three universes.

Alethia Eveningstar is the daughter of Marcus, the God of War and Queen of the Stars and is destined to defeat Kakaron, God of Chaos before she can inherit her father's title. Kakaron seduces and betrays Alethia before making an escape. The Goddess-to-Be has to live ten or eleven lives encountering and fighting Kakaron before their final battle. Most of the book is set during two of those lives: Our Realm, where she is a high school girl in modern times discovering magic powers while dealing with new friendships, romance, and studies and the Other Realm, a Medieval like forest where her powers manifest as she is involved in a love triangle between her betrothed and a handsome and familiar stranger.

For a short novel of 178 pages, a lot is accomplished in an impressive manner. Curl devotes enough time to all three universes to give us ideas of the plots, settings, and characters and how they overlap and interact with each other. 

With time and interdimensional travel and the decision to set alternating chapters into different worlds, Awakening can be a very difficult book to follow. But thankfully many plot points parallel each other enough so if it already happened in one universe, the Reader will expect it to happen in another.

The key is to make each universe unique from the others and Curl does this superlatively. We know that Alethia and Kakaron are destined to encounter each other in each universe. 
There are also friends, relatives, authority figures, and romantic rivals that carry over in amusing ways. It gets to the point where the Reader goes “Okay there's this character in Our Realm. She should appear in the Outer Realm right about..now.” It becomes an interesting game to see how quickly the characters' doppelgangers appear and in what way plots shift in the various worlds.

There are some interesting twists to keep Readers from expecting or assuming too much. One character strangely can jump from universe to universe so instead of being a reincarnated soul or a double, he's the same person in all three worlds and is able to teach Our World Alethia this ability so she can see what her Other Realm counterpart can. The circumstances of how Alethia and Kakaron meet, what forms they take, who seduced who, and how they discover the truth are different each time. Different enough that in one universe, Kakaron’s reveal is a genuine surprise. It keeps the momentum going in this strange novel.

Eveningstar: Awakening has a lot of fun playing with the laws of time and space and taking the Reader along with it.

 


Friday, July 26, 2024

Hell's Beginning by John T.M. Herres; Bloody, Graphic, Paranoiac Horror/Thriller About a Unique Killer


 Hell's Beginning by John T.M. Herres; Bloody, Graphic, Paranoiac Horror/Thriller About a Unique Killer

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 


Spoilers: I will have to reveal a very important plot twist so I will reiterate that this review has VERY IMPORTANT MAJOR HEAVY DUTY SPOILERS!!!!

 What can be worse than facing a creature that defies human explanation, has superhuman abilities, has origins that date back to ancient times, has no compassion, empathy, or human emotions, and is seemingly unstoppable? How about one who is all of that and one that you can't see and could potentially be anyone around you?

That is the concept surrounding John T.M. Herres’ Hell's Beginning, a graphic, bloody, paranoiac Supernatural Horror about a hunt for a creature just like that.

In the beginning of the book, we receive a first person narration from a very creepy character who is planning to rape and abduct Sharon, a woman whom they see in a bar. After that happens, they pursue a group of young people at a make out session. When one of the kids at the session, Tammy, is reported missing, the search is on for her and Sharon's kidnapper and potential murderer.

Okay, not bad, not good but familiar. It’s from the point of view of a serial kidnapper, possibly killer, a human serial kidnapper and their victims. We’ve read that before. 

The book alternates perspectives. The Abductor gives theirs as they psyche themselves up before they put their awful thoughts into action and the victims give theirs as they struggle to survive and fight this terrifying ordeal.

The book is very tense and there is definitely a sense that The Abductor is driven by uncontrollable obsessions and compulsions. “It's just a Psychological Thriller,” we might be heard to say, “Just a very real frightening human Psychological Thriller.”

Then something happens that completely changes how we see The Abductor and the society in which they live. When The Abductor is murdered in retaliation by Mike, one of Tammy's friends, a blue mist emerges and enters inside Mike. Suddenly, Mike has a different voice and outlook and is also compelled by a desire to claim and destroy everything around him.

Hell's Beginning shifts from a Psychological Thriller to a Supernatural Horror. What was once human now is something demonic. It was someone with a form, a shape, and a body.

There may have been a reason, an actual origin for their hatred and what they did. While it's hard to get into the minds of a serial killer, at least you know what might happen when you're in there. At least a human psychotic can be stopped by a bullet, their own hand, or a prison cell. We know what the characters are getting into when they confront them. It may not end up well for everyone but at least they can be defeated.

Now what we read about is something completely different. A human killer is replaced by a demonic force that enters a human body and forces it to commit violence. The human host has completely mentally disappeared leaving the parasite demon in its place. 

This exchange with Mike isn't the first and only time that The Demon has done this. It's done this before and since several times throughout the book, hopping from body to body and controlling one mind after another.

Just think about it. This Demon can't be killed because it goes from the victim to the murderer. It takes a different form and voice and is smart enough to access its new host’s memories and experiences to imitate them flawlessly and gain access to their stuff. Its pursuers don't know who it is inside next. 

It could be in anyone and anywhere. A bystander, a witness, a family member, even their own spouse or partner. The paranoia is justifiably thick as characters have to face an enemy that is potentially all around them.

There is an interesting subtext concerning the Demon. It slips between human forms when the human kills the previous body. Perhaps The Demon is a metaphor for violence itself. Jumping from body to body suggests that we all have the capacity to commit violence. 

That urge lays dormant inside us and is just waiting for an outlet to bring it forward. Whether because of hatred, vengeance, self-defense, or commitment to patriotism and justice, sometimes we want to hurt others. This demon is just a manifestation of our worst desires to do so.

It's easy to defeat a monster that exists outside of oneself. It's a Hell of a lot harder to fight the one within.

Thursday, July 25, 2024

The Street Between The Pines by J.J. Alo; Mesmerizing Supernatural Thriller Let Down By Demystifying Explanation

The Street Between The Pines by J.J. Alo; Mesmerizing Supernatural Thriller Let Down By Demystifying Explanation 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews


Spoilers: J.J. Alo’s novel, The Street Between The Pines, illustrates the difficulties of crossing subgenres and making the Reader think that they are reading one specific type of book only to realize that they are reading a completely different one. 


When a tropical storm pounds down rain, lightning, wind, floods, and more severe weather into New England, Norwich, Connecticut is hit with some strange occurrences. A man is practically devoured by an unknown creature. Another man is pulled into a river while fishing for a very large catch. A woman goes missing after she walks her dog. Clowders of mysterious cats are seen everywhere. An estranged couple comes face to face with a powerful and terrifying sea monster as their basement is flooded. What is going on? Is it something supernatural? A curse on the town? A creature from local New England legends making an appearance? An ancient God displeased with humanity's destruction of the planet? Is there a more logical explanation? Perhaps a science experiment gone awry? A government conspiracy? An experiment in mass psychosis? Parallel dimensions? Aliens? 


The first half of the book suggests one possibility. Then it does a 180 and gives another explanation making an uneven work that captures two distinct subgenres and ends up doing neither one any favors.


I have mentioned many times that I love when books transcend genres and do various things. A police officer investigates a case of grizzly serial murders and comes face to face with a vampire. A college freshman explores life and love at a university where they study magic. Boy meets girl/alien at a singles bar in a far off galaxy. Good authors that combine subgenres keep the Readers on edge and off kilter so they can see beyond the tropes and expectations and embrace this strange offspring of two very different parents. 


However, it's very important to make sure that the couple is compatible before they copulate. The Author has to maintain the delicate balance between the various subgenres so the results are melded together and are not jarring. Unfortunately, The Street Between The Pines is very jarring. 


The first half of the book is far better than the second. There are very chilling chapters which illustrate the “nothing is scarier than something” trope that is so common in horror. Characters investigate something weird happening and can hear a strange noise creaking around the backyard, some sea creature a lot larger than a duck moving in the water, or can just make out a mysterious shadow. Unfortunately they are then attacked and that strange figure is the last thing that they will ever see.


Everything suggests some strange crossing of the natural and supernatural world. The cats offer some sinister foreshadowing since they have never been seen around these areas of Norwich before. They could be foreshadowing the death and destruction that is to come.


The flood motif throughout the book plays on uncontrollable environmental fear. As the water overwhelms the homes and leaves people in survival mode, the attacks become more prominent. The destruction of nature and the arrival of the supernatural serves as both an intended disruption and condemnation. With flooding of coastal towns and cities being a prominent sign of climate change, it may be no coincidence that Alo used it so often as a metaphor. This natural destruction suggests that humanity has messed with nature long enough so nature works with humanity's greatest fears to settle the score.


The book also captures regional folklore. One character researches books and sites to discover the type of creature that attacked their house and discovers the Norwaukus, a Connecticut based cryptid. It is fascinating for both locals and outsiders when authors base their books on local folklore. Those who are from that area will like the inside reference and those who aren't will enjoy getting introduced to a new legend and character.


I have not found any information to show that the Norwaukus is an actual cryptid from Connecticut legends. More than likely it's based on the Glawackus, which is described as “one of Connecticut’s big three cryptids.” (The other two are the Black Dog of the Hanging Hills and the Winstead Wildman.) It is a very interesting and unique take to bring a local creature to the front of one’s book and give it some national attention.


However this supernatural horror devolves into something else. For spoiler’s sake not much will be revealed about the resolutions. Characters learn the origins of these cryptids and what the purpose was behind the attacks. Unfortunately it's revealed in a clunky overly verbose section that turns a Supernatural Horror into a Science Fiction Thriller and not a good one.


The exposition is rather tedious, boring, and comes out of nowhere. It creates some plot holes and frustrating unexplained questions such as why the creatures attacked coincidentally at the same time as the severe weather. Why were particular characters singled out to be attacked? What role did the cats play and if none at all why did the narration make a big deal about them? 


 The worst part of all is that the explanation also removes the mystery from the cryptids. This in turn makes them less scary. They were much more chilling when we didn't know about them and could fill in our own assumptions or at least if the resolution had an unusual paranormal explanation

on to it. Instead, they are seen not as creatures who live to themselves and have no means of

being controlled or subdued. Instead they became

servile pawns to achieve someone human’s

ambitions.


The suspense is removed and the threat is

weakened. This turns a book that started out so

promising into a slow sluggish ponderous mess. 

 

Tuesday, July 23, 2024

American Odyssey The Devil's Hand by B.F. Hess; Gripping Modern Day Faustian Supernatural Horror ..Or Is It?


 American Odyssey The Devil's Hand by B.F. Hess; Gripping Modern Day Faustian Supernatural Horror ..Or Is It?

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 

Spoilers: I guess there's no time like the present to read a modern day adaptation of the Faust story like B.F. Hess’ American Odyssey: The Devil's Hand. It has many of the usual tropes found in the adaptations: cocky ambitious protagonist, creepy and charming demonic figure, deal with the devil, naive troubled love interest, many good times of untold wealth and fame, terrifying supernatural moments, and the climax when it all goes horribly wrong and the devil comes to collect. What makes American Odyssey different is the blurred lines between fantasy and reality, sanity and madness, delusion and truth. 

Uriel Jacob Sullinger, the latest patient at the Clay County Home for the Mentally Ill, has an interesting story to tell his psychiatrist, Dr. Kessler. Jacob was once a rich, powerful, influential lawyer. During a case, Jacob receives an unusual offer from a friend to strike a deal with a M. Diabolus. When Jacob meets Diabolus, he can't help but notice that there is something mesmerizing but sinister about him. Dare we even say potentially demonic? 

American Odyssey is an interesting send up to the Faustian Legend. The modernized touches make the legend relevant and relatable to Readers. Instead of a demonic figure magically popping in and out from nowhere, Diabolus is dressed in fine tailored suits and has clandestine meetings in penthouses and limos. Instead of signing contracts written in blood, Diabolus like most businessmen rely on third parties and legal loopholes to get his souls.

It's similar to the movie, The Devil's Advocate which also depicts Satan (played by a deliciously diabolical Al Pacino) as a modern day businessman who uses the contemporary world to his advantage. 

There are some other touches that build on familiar tropes. Jacob was raised by an eccentric great uncle, who had a very loose definition of what is considered legal, and served as Jacob’s Wise Old Mentor. There's Fran, a married older woman who is ruined by her association with Jacob. There's Angelica, a sweet restaurateur who helps Jacob when he hits rock bottom and takes him to get the resources that he needs. Her name and personality might not be the only things angelic about her. Jacob is tormented by nightmares and visions of demons, fire, and torture that cause him to question his sanity and require medication to control.

Speaking of questions of sanity and requiring medication, there is another subtle more subversive element to this book that makes it more than a postmodern “Deal with the Devil.” There's an ongoing theme of mental health and the decline of it. The novel begins in a psychiatric hospital and Jacob recounts his story to his psychiatrist. Jacob spends the first few chapters detailing his upbringing by his great uncle and there are definite signs of inherited mental illness. Kessler even admits that he considers Jacob's great uncle a friend because of their time as philanthropist and beneficiary but also as doctor and patient. There are also revelations towards the end that Jacob is the latest in a long line of family members that have had psychological disorders and let's just say did not express them in the healthiest of ways. 

This background information casts the Reader in the role of a dubious skeptic wondering how much of the book is true in a literal sense, a figurative sense, or just a series of visual and auditory hallucinations. This question is never answered and leaves room for alternative possibilities and theories. 

Looking at his story from a more detached analytical perspective, it's possible that this is not the adventures of a man making a deal with the devil but the story of a man who is fighting a losing battle against his own sanity. His nightmares may not be supernatural but hallucinations. Seeing religious significance in real people like Diabolus and Angelica could be symptoms of paranoid delusions and they are neither diabolical nor divine messengers. His biggest battle might not be good vs. evil but instead madness vs. sanity.

If he's not damned by Satan, then Jacob is damned by his own mind. One can confront the Prince of Darkness, but can they ever really confront the darkness within themselves if they don't recognize it?




Sunday, July 21, 2024

I Was a Teenage Communist by JC Hopkins: Seriocomic Novel About Teen Communism Growing Up in Reagan Era America


 I Was a Teenage Communist by JC Hopkins: Seriocomic Novel About Teen Communism Growing Up in Reagan Era America 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 


Spoilers: The teen years are a time to explore connections to the world around us. To find ideologies that speak to us, friends that accept us, and breaking familiar patterns while discovering new ones. JC Hopkins YA novel, I Was a Teenage Communist, is about that.

In 1981 Orange County, California, a group of high school misfits are fed up with the Capitalist Materialistic Reaganomics world around them. They are interested in the philosophies expressed by Karl Marx and become fascinated by Socialism, Marxism, and Communism. Despite personal turmoil in their lives, the teens surreptitiously distribute through their school a newsletter that expresses their newfound beliefs and challenges the system that they see around them.

The protagonists are an eclectic group of outcasts. They consist of: Sunshine, a trans female trying to live her life truthfully. Davy, AKA Savior is a smooth talking philosopher fascinated with religious and spiritual questions. Geraldo is a firebrand ready to embrace the paths of his friends and older brother as his world crumbles around him. Tommy is a musician obsessed with conspiracies. Tommy's brother, Barry is the quiet leader and is described as a “legitimate red.” Finally, there's Charles, Geraldo’s older brother who is a political activist and the teens’ mentor. Through an eventful school year of bullies, romances, break ups, neglect, abuse, coming out, parental separation, activism, punishment, and politics, the kids make their voices and views heard.

I Was a Teenage Communist uses political ideologies as a framework to capture the conflicted and complex personal lives of the young protagonists. That's not to say that politics isn't important. It absolutely is in this book. These kids are motivated by the society that surrounds them. They see income inequality, American Imperialism, Reagan’s reactionary policies, jingoistic patriotic propaganda, the superficial “Greed is Good'' Yuppie culture, Christian Nationalism making its first links to the Republican party, rejection towards the LGBT+ community, and a sharp decline in women's and minorities’ rights. These are problems and issues that shaped that time period and honestly haven't gotten any better in 2024. If anything they have gotten worse. It's easy to see why someone would want to embrace a political structure that is contrary to what they are faced with every day.

Even if the Reader doesn't agree with their political ideology, what they may understand and relate to are the reasons that the protagonists embrace Communism. Everyone is looking for some reason and need that isn't being filled by their known world. Geraldo is looking to make his voice heard and a surrogate family when his actual family falls apart and are caught up in their own problems. Davy is looking for spiritual answers that aren't being fulfilled by the religion around him and artistic and creative freedom. Sunshine and Tommy are looking for acceptance towards their sexuality and gender identity. Barry is looking to make some noise. Charles is looking for a way to hold onto his ideals as maturity and stability hover near him. This is a lost group looking for a way to be found.

Politics is important to the characters in this book but what also emerges are their personal problems. Teenagers by and large are emotional, reckless, thoughtless, immature, rebellious for the sake of being rebellious, argumentative for the sake of arguing, snarky, obnoxious, inquisitive, loyal to their friends, sensitive, curious, and idealistic. The protagonists are all of these traits and more. Sometimes, they are written so broadly that they almost reach parodic or satiric proportions. However, there are also layers of humanity that make them whole figures that are meant to be understood and not laughed at.

The characters follow their Communist path as they are faced with various conflicts. Geraldo and Charles's father walked out on them and their mother responded by having an affair with a colleague. Geraldo begins to date Maria, an undocumented immigrant and the troubles that she endures make him even more determined to fight the system. Charles’ relationship with his girlfriend, April, becomes more complicated when his mother gets involved with her father.

Davy is torn between his spiritual philosophical pursuits and his basest sexual longings. He hops from girl to girl as much as he moves from one religious path to another. Tommy weighs a new romance with Sunshine and his acceptance of her identity. The cause means everything to Barry so he doesn't have much in the way of a private life. He tries to keep his friends as focused and driven as he is as they make their plans.

By far the darkest and most heartbreaking subplot is that of Sunshine's. She is comfortable with her gender identity in front of her friends and new boyfriend despite parental objections. Those objections graduate from words to actions as Sunshine's parents put her into a conversion therapy center. Hopkins does not skimp on the details about how the experience is physical and psychological torture that traumatizes her. Her ties to her friends are strengthened as they try everything that they can do to get her out. However the bonds with her parents are forever weakened as they allow such a cruel and dangerous ordeal to happen to the child that they should have loved and accepted.

I Was a Teenage Communist is a great mixture of how the political and personal affect young people. It is a book that is better read than dead.

Wednesday, July 17, 2024

Dancing in the Ring by Susan E. Sage; Historical Fiction Based on Family History Captures The Complexities of a Marriage

Dancing in the Ring by Susan E. Sage; Historical Fiction Based on Family History Captures The Complexities of a Marriage 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews


Spoilers: Susan E. Sage’s novel, Dancing in the Ring, tells the fictionalized account of her great uncle and aunt, Bob and Catherine McIntosh Sage with honesty, beauty, humor, tragedy, and thankfully without rose tinted nostalgia. She brings her ancestors to life recalling both the good and the bad of their passionate, eventful, and sometimes troubled marriage.

Catherine McIntosh is a bright ambitious law student in 1920’s Detroit ready to become a lawyer even though there are very few women attorneys. In 1922, she met Bob “The Battling Barrister” Sage, a fellow law student and professional boxer. Bob is smitten at first sight by the feisty and brainy Irish-American beauty. She does not reciprocate at first but ultimately is won over. The two formed a relationship despite conflicts within their family and pressures at school and work. 

Most of the book is set after their marriage in 1925 and recounts their good and bad times.

This is a thorough meticulous book with two full, rich, engaging, and captivating characters. Catherine is an independent career woman who in the 1920’s wasn't interested in marriage or starting a family. She saw stifling often violent marriages with her parents and sisters and has good reason to withdraw from the role that her family expects her to play.

 Catherine has a developed sense of fairness and justice such as when she defends her friend Grace, an African-American lawyer after she is faced with discrimination. During her legal career, she helps impoverished women and unwed mothers. 

Bob is interested in his legal practice but also has other interests that take up his time. He failed the bar three times before finally passing. For a time, he is more interested in the battles in the boxing ring than in the courtroom. His boxing career is successful until he starts aging out and he instead focuses on the law. Either way, he is a fighter and learned from personal experience.

Like Catherine, he is shaped by his environment. His father and some siblings, including his twin brother, died so he is used to being on his own. That fighting spirit is an asset in his life and career as he helps his clients and bonds with troubled youths, particularly his nephew.

With two people that are both independent, bad tempered, and possess fighting spirits, there are bound to be troubles within their marriage. Sage does not shy away from describing her great aunt and uncle's darker natures. Their marriage has many positive moments. They work together to create their own law practice, Sage & Sage. They attend dances, speakeasies, and social gatherings. They go to romantic spots and dance to standard music. Even though they don't have children, they have a wide circle of friends and family and are surrogate parents to Bob’s nephew, Bobby Gene. The book splashes with details about their lives in the 20’s and 30’s.

Unfortunately, for every pleasant moment, there are just as many unhappy ones. It would be tempting for Sage to be nostalgic and gloss over Bob and Catherine’s problems. It can be hard to write a family history and acknowledge the bad parts within a family and to see relatives as real people and those long ago times with a more critical view. Sage, however, faces these darker dimensions head on and does it in a way that is both beautiful and tragic.

The elder Sage's marriage was rocked by infidelity, alcoholism, miscarriages, and at times abuse. Their fights are harrowing as they use their words and sometimes hands and objects to make their points. The Great Depression takes a huge toll as their law firm closes. Catherine is denied employment because she is a woman and Bob’s boxing career ends just as his law one does. The stress of outside events and their own mercurial natures turn on them in frightening ways that results in separation. 

There is a sense of fatalism that resonates throughout the book mostly revealed through dreams and visions. Since Bob and Catherine come from Irish-American families, they are attuned to the Irish beliefs in the mystical, second sight, and extra sensory perception. Catherine's grandmother and Bob’s mother make predictions that are later found to be true. Some of the more frightening passages occur when Bob and Catherine have dreams. Catherine dreams that she is surrounded by fire and Bob sees visions of himself standing over three men that he might have killed. 

The dreams are constant threads that carry throughout the book and build to a climax that suggests that the Sage's fates were sealed long ago. Their lives had both triumph and tragedy, laughter and tears, joyful and angry moments. They might have avoided those endings that they saw by not meeting, getting married, or living their lives the way that they did. However after getting to know Bob and Catherine Sage, the Reader knows not only that they couldn't have but that they wouldn't want to. They lived their lives with passion, commitment, independence, strength, and honesty. They wouldn't have had it any other way.

 

Wednesday, July 10, 2024

Cicadas: A Summer Story by Jenna Putnam; The Republic of Plato Book 1: Views on Justice by G. McLaughlin; Super Easy Keto Diet Book for Beginners Over 60: 2000+ Days Low Carb, Low Sugar & Delicious Keto Recipes Cookbook-Assist in Trimming Excess Fat/Includes 30 Day Meal Plans by Branimira Ivanec; 2024 Ultimate Mediterranean Diet Cookbook for Beginners: 1900 Days Easy, Tasty & Nutritious Recipes Book for Balanced and Better Eating A No-Stress 30-Day Meal Plan by Asuman Veer; 2024 Time-Saving Air Fryer Cookbook for Beginners: 2000+ Days Easy, Delicious & Budget-Friendly Recipes Book for Busy Beginners and Family Favorites Inc. Everyday Fry, Bake, Grill, & Roast by Mette A. Mogensen

 Cicadas: A Summer Story by Jenna Putnam; The Republic of Plato Book 1: Views on Justice by G. McLaughlin; Super Easy Keto Diet Book for Beginners Over 60: 2000+ Days Low Carb, Low Sugar & Delicious Keto Recipes Cookbook-Assist in Trimming Excess Fat/Includes 30 Day Meal Plans by Branimira Ivanec; 2024 Ultimate Mediterranean Diet Cookbook for Beginners: 1900 Days Easy, Tasty & Nutritious Recipes Book for Balanced and Better Eating A No-Stress 30-Day Meal Plan by Asuman Veer; 2024 Time-Saving Air Fryer Cookbook for Beginners: 2000+ Days Easy, Delicious & Budget-Friendly Recipes Book for Busy Beginners and Family Favorites Inc. Everyday Fry, Bake, Grill, & Roast by Mette A. Mogensen




Cicadas: A Summer Story by Jenna Putnam

With its brief length, seasonally appropriate setting, and its heated love shape, Cicadas makes for perfect summertime reading.


Anouk has been having an affair with Michael, a married man. Don't worry, he says, it's an open marriage. Things become more complicated when Anouk meets and befriends Michaels wife, Marina and she is invited to join them on a summer retreat with another couple where the pairings and affairs become more complex and convoluted.


The novella is short, 46 pages, so it doesn’t have a lot of time to dwell on anything more than the important plot points. When it does, it makes for a very emotional passion driven read. We get some background information about how Anouk and Michael’s affair started and how she was put into Marina’s confidence enough for her to confide a painful family secret to her husband’s mistress. There is also time to pull other people into the triangle to further complicate things as other lovers are revealed and one character’s infatuation for another becomes volatile and obsessive. 


Even though we are given very little because of the brief length, what we are given makes the various parts of this love triangle plus other shapes interesting. Most of the hidden depths and motivations of the characters are suggested rather than outright stated. For example, learning about a loss within Michael’s family turns him from a devil may care philanderer to a pathetic sod drifting away from his wife and trying to hold onto anything to give him feeling. He inspires lust, understanding, empathy, and irritation all at once.


Anouk herself goes through a painful journey of self awareness. She begins the affair incredibly naive and lost in her emotions, believing that she needs to be in a relationship no matter how many red flags that she sees. She knows that having an affair with a married man could lead to trouble but she wants to believe Michael’s excuses and ignores Marina’s existence. That works until she meets and begins to like her. Suddenly that unspoken guilt has a face and a name. The turning point occurs during the vacation and Anouk sees Michael for who he really is. She loses the illusions that she once had of being in a romantic relationship and makes changes towards her own life. After her romantic illusions are shattered, Anouk is able to find the independence and self-awareness to leave the situation with the knowledge that she doesn’t need to be in a relationship to feel complete. 


Besides the character’s journeys and brief length, what makes Cicadas ideal summer reading is the setting. For a story drenched in love affairs and hidden passions, the setting is rather apt. Anouk’s first look at Michael and Marina’s vacation home is as follows: “The summer house was everything that Anouk had imagined. Huge Spanish archways, walls covered in ivy, a balcony overlooking wild greenery that stretched all the way to the ocean. On one side of the house was a gazebo with four wooden posts and a tarnished picnic-style table beneath it. She thought of all the dinners that had taken place there, all the people Michael and Marina seduced and danced with under the moonlight.”


The book is filled with summertime imagery: sunshine, heat, cool water, outdoor picnics, dancing under the moonlight, beach houses, and longer days. Even the title, Cicadas, lends itself to that because cicadas are insects that mate every seven to fourteen years and make plenty of noise while doing so. 2024 is particularly notable for this because both the 7 and 14 year cicadas made their appearances. 

Everything in the book calls to mind a time of fun and passion. Sometimes, like the weather, a romance becomes hot and uncomfortable and you have to get away from it into the cool breeze of a safe air conditioned home. However, there is a constant awareness that summer is a brief fleeting time of three months of the year. It is only temporary. The cicadas do their mating calls for a couple of weeks then go underground. Sometimes passion and romance is temporary. What was once exciting and sexual gets cooled off when faced with reality. Summer becomes autumn and one is left with the options of staying in a relationship that may not work or finding the courage to leave it. 



The Republic of Plato Book 1: Views on Justice by G. McLaughlin 

G. McLaughlin’s novella, The Republic of Plato, offers a condensed and simple way of remembering the Ancient Greek philosopher’s teachings: through verse. 


The first volume, Views on Justice, interprets the teachings of Plato’s mentor, Socrates into rhyming couplets. In four chapters, the philosopher offers lessons on “Justice as Honesty in Word and Deed,” “Justice as Helping Friends and Harming Enemies,” “Justice as the Interest of the Stronger,” and “Justice is More Profitable than Injustice.”


The rhyme scheme is simple with  couplets at the end of each line. (“Socrates was walking down the mountain from a festival of lights/A group of children came up smiling with laughter and delight.”) It reads almost like a kid’s guide to philosophy or a book by Dr. Seuss. Readers who are unfamiliar with philosophy may find this approach helpful as it condenses the philosophies in a way that is engaging and easily understood.


While the rhyme scheme is simple, the discussions are complex.  Socrates talks to a friend or student about a specific question and gives his answer based on examples. This allows Readers to pay attention to the questions that are posed and the answers that are given. For example, Polemarchus, a belligerent student asks if telling the truth and paying debts are the right way. 


Socrates expands the other man’s thinking by offering situational challenges like whether people from different occupations may not earn the same as others should be treated differently or whether there are different standards between friends and enemies. Just like many philosophical questions, there are no right or wrong answers. They are often designed to challenge superficial perspectives and think critically and deeply about what we have previously believed.


The Republic of Plato is a fun and engaging way to learn about Socrates and Plato and their philosophies. These questions on justice are ones that are still thought about today and this book presents interesting perspectives on them. 





Super Easy Keto Diet Book for Beginners Over 60: 2000+ Days Low Carb, Low Sugar & Delicious Keto Recipes Cookbook-Assist in Trimming Excess Fat/Includes 30 Day Meal Plans by Branimira Ivanec


Branimira Ivanec’s Super Easy Keto Diet Book for Beginners is a book of delicious healthy recipes but it is also a book that reminds its Readers of the importance and benefits that maintaining a healthy lifestyle can bring.

The book first describes the principles and benefits of a ketogenic lifestyle. Principles include “Low carbohydrate intake,” “Nutrient-dense whole foods,” “Hydration and electrolyte balance,” “Meal timing and intermittent fasting,” “Whole body wellness,” and “Continuous learning and adaptation.” 
Benefits include “Blood sugar control,” “Increased energy and mental clarity,” “Enhanced physical endurance,” “Positive metabolic changes,” “Hormonal regulation,” “Disease prevention,” and “Improved skin health.”

The recipes are varied for Breakfast, Fish, Seafood, Poultry, Beef, Pork, Lamb, Soups, Stews, Vegetarian Mains, Appetizers, Snacks, Desserts. They include “No-Nuts Granola with Clusters,” “Aromatic Monkfish Stew,” “Crackling Creole Crispy Chicken Thighs,” “Pan-Seared Steak with Mushroom Sauce,” “Broc Obama Cheese Soup,” “Cheesy Cauliflower Pizza Crust,” “Everything Bagel Cream Cheese Dip,” and “Salted Chocolate-Macademia Nut Fat Bombs.”

The Super Easy Keto Diet Book is an interesting guide to create healthy meals and understanding how it helps the body, mind, and soul.






2024 Ultimate Mediterranean Diet Cookbook for Beginners: 1900 Days Easy, Tasty & Nutritious Recipes Book for Balanced and Better Eating A No-Stress 30-Day Meal Plan by Asuman Veer

Readers of the Ultimate Mediterranean Diet Cookbook for Beginners is a delectable way for Readers to engage in Mediterranean culture and in particular its food.

The introduction to the book offers information on the benefits of Mediterranean cooking like hearty health, weight management, Diabetes prevention and management, anti-inflammatory effects, cognitive health, and longevity. It also describes the essence of Mediterranean cooking including healthy fats, plant-based foods, whole grains, lean proteins, herbs, spices, moderate wine consumption, mindful eating, and social connections. It also stresses community by promoting celebrating food, local markets, and culinary heritage.

There is a variety of meals including breakfast, beans, grains, poultry, fish, seafood, beef, pork, lamb, snacks, appetizers, vegetable sides, vegetarian mains, sides, salads, pasta, pizza, wraps, sandwiches, desserts, sauces, staples, dips, and dressings.

Recipes include “Flax, Date, and Walnut Steel-Cut Oats,” “Falafel,” “Chicken Souvlaki,” “Mussels with Fennel and Leeks,” “Steak Gyro Platter,” “Halloumi, Watermelon, Tomato Kebabs with Basil Oil Drizzle,” “Mediterranean Cauliflower Tabbouleh,” “Turkish Red Lentil and Bulgur Kofte,” “Arugula Salad with Grapes, Goat Cheese, and Za’atar Croutons,” “Toasted Couscous with Feta, Cucumber, and Tomato,” “Za’atar Pizza,” “Olive Oil Greek Yogurt Brownies,” and “Piri Piri Sauce.” They reflect the variety, health, and delicious food around the Mediterranean Sea.

The Ultimate Mediterranean Diet Cookbook for Beginners is a great book that opens a rich tradition and culture of food, family, and togetherness.









2024 Time-Saving Air Fryer Cookbook for Beginners: 2000+ Days Easy, Delicious & Budget-Friendly Recipes Book for Busy Beginners and Family Favorites Inc. Everyday Fry, Bake, Grill, & Roast by Mette A. Mogensen

The Time-Saving Air Fryer Cookbook for Beginners is a great book for experimenting with simple cooking. It helps people prepare simple meals and take advantage of their air-fryer which is described in the book as a “kitchen superhero” for making crisp versatile meals.

As with many cookbooks, this book provides plenty of varied recipes for "Breakfast, Family Favorite, Fast and Easy Everyday Favorites, Vegetables, Sides, Vegetarian Mains, Poultry, Beef, Pork, Lamb, Fish, Seafood, Snacks, Appetizers, and Desserts." 

The recipes offer some ideas for various healthy and delicious meals. They include “Jalapeno and Bacon Breakfast Pizza,” “Phyllo Vegetable Tacos,” “Sweet Corn and Carrot Fritters,” “Indian Eggplant Bharta,” “Cayenne Tahini Kale,” “Cornish Hens with Honey-Lime Glaze,” “Bo Luc Lac”, “Dukkah Crusted Halibut,” “Garlic Edamame,” and “New York Cheesecake.”


An air fryer is a useful cooking appliance and this book is a great companion for it.




Wednesday, July 3, 2024

July's Reading List


 July’s Reading List 

By Julie Sara Porter 

Bookworm Reviews 


June was pretty good. Only two reviews, Devil Cries Stones by Tina Soctoy and The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls by Emilie Autumn, were put off. I will postpone them until later to work on more time sensitive reviews.


This seems like a great month with plenty of titles and variety. I can't wait to get started.



Blue by Charles Keatts


Cicadas: A Summer Story by Jenna Putnam 


I Was a Teenage Communist by JC Hopkins 


The Others (Book 1 in the Council Trilogy) by Evette Davis*


Hell’s Beginning by John T.M. Herres


The Street Between The Pines by J.J. Alo


The Republic of Plato Book 1: Views on Justice by G. McLaughlin 


The Blind Smith( Book 1 in the Forge Trilogy in the Shadow Guardian Series) by G. Russell Gaynor


The Mantis Variant (Book 1: The Mantis Gland) by Adam Andrews Johnson 


Dancing in the Ring by Susan E. Sage 


Girl in the Corn (Girl in the Corn Book 1)by Jason Offutt 


Evening Star: Awakening by Samantha Curl


Said the Spider to the Fly by Findlay Ward


Tales of Whiskey Tango from Misery Towers by James Aylott


Lunar Nationals: Alpha Squad by V.S. Hall


Gingered: A Memoir by Ryan G. Murphy 


American Odyssey: The Devil's Hand by B.F. Hess


Super Easy Keto Diet Book for Beginners Over 60: 2000+ Days Low Carb, Low Sugar & Delicious Keto Recipes Cookbook-Assist in Trimming Excess Fat/Includes 30 Day Meal Plans by Branimira Ivanec


2024 Ultimate Mediterranean Diet Cookbook for Beginners: 1900 Days Easy, Tasty & Nutritious Recipes Book for Balanced and Better Eating A No-Stress 30-Day Meal Plan by Asuman Veer


2024 Time-Saving Air Fryer Cookbook for Beginners: 2000+ Days Easy, Delicious & Budget-Friendly Recipes Book for Busy Beginners and Family Favorites Inc. Everyday Fry, Bake, Grill, & Roast by Mette A. Mogensen


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Well that's it. Thanks and as always, Happy Reading.